Monday, December 23, 2013


A Little Boy Who Wants to See Santa

Once up on a time, there was a child who wanted very much to see Santa Claus; just as every other child has always wanted to see him.

So the Child listened at the chimney for Santa Claus, and watched for him when sleighs flew by over the snowy streets, and wanted to touch his rosy cheeks and his red cloak trimmed with white fur.

"I am old enough now to see Santa Claus," the Child said. That was quite true, because he was seven years old. "Show him to me, mother," he begged.

"Oh, I cannot do that," the Child's mother said. "I can tell you about Santa Claus but I cannot show you his face."

"May I go out and look for Santa Claus, myself, then?" the Child asked. "This is the day before Christmas and if I do not see him today, you know I shall have to wait a whole year."

"Yes, you may go out and look for Santa Claus," the Child's mother said, and she brought him his warm coat and cap and his red mittens; "but do not go too far away from home, for Santa Claus stays very close to the homes where there are children on Christmas Eve," she added.

So the Child started out. He was very sure that he would know Santa Claus when he saw him. Ever since he was a very little boy he had seen pictures of Santa Claus. He would be a jolly, fat little old man with twinkling eyes and a nose like a cherry. He would wear a long red cloak and, perhaps, he would be in his toy shop making toys, of which he would give the child a great many. Or he would be driving his sleigh full of toys through the city, and the Child would know that he was coming by the tinkling sound of his silver bells.

 

·         Complete the story and write the ending.

 

11 comments:

  1. I think he won't find the Santa , and he will return his home sad :(

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    1. This is good start but you should finish the story in an interesting way.

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  2. The child waited-waited and went home because was late. But he was surprised to see the gifts. He cried ''How can Santa came when I was outside.''
    Mother said "Don't cry, because Santa had fulfilled your dreams"
    And I wish you everyone a good New Year. If Santa does not want to see him it's not a problem. But let him fulfill all our dreams.

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  3. :) I believe he will see him...
    When I was younger, I used to go out every year in the New Years nights. You know, I felt like Santa is in the light sky, back of the dark mountains :) It really was magical feeling. In ordinary daily I never could go out because of scare but I do believe that Santa helped me that night to break it and go out for amazing feeling.
    I am sure, that the boy will feel that too...:)

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    1. Your experience is really good one but the ending should be about the boy sweetie, not about you.. When you say the Mountains it would be better to use (behind)..
      - It would also be better to say (It used to be a magical feeling..)
      -On ordinary days, I couldn't go out because it may be scary, but I used to believe that Santa helped ...to experience that amazing feeling.

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  4. The child started to search for Santa in the near by toy's shops. but unfortunately he didn't find the Santa, and he went back to home very sad. He went to his room to sleep. suddenly he heard a voice coming from there chimney. He run there and saw Santa with
    a big bag filled with gifts. he was freeze. Santa hugged him, gave him his gift and said Merry Christmas son. Santa went back to chimney and disappeared. He saw Santa and believed that there is Santa.
    I WISH FOR ALL TO MEET SANTA ONE DAY......

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    1. - Good job Lana
      - you should say (near the toy store)
      - Capital (Unfortunately)
      -the chimney
      -He ran
      -He was frozen

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  5. The Child will find Santa, but these people wouldn't be real Santa Claus... After that he will come back and he will be disappointed.
    I think that we haven't Santa Claus in the world. I don't understand how can he get money to buy toys ??? Is he old or grandfather??? Yes, of course. And how can he work??? I don't know. I don't understand does money born every time??? Were dose money come from??? Is his family business family??? Or do they have many factories??? But I know that he havn't eny family...

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    1. - Good Jon Anahit, but this should be about the boy
      - don't have
      -money born?? I didn't get this one
      -Where those
      Sweetie there is no need for these questions at the end of the paragraph

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  6. The child went out and looked for Santa Claus but couldn't find him. He decided to wait him. The child had been waiting for about twenty minutes when he heard sleighs tinkle. He ran toward the sound and he was very happy when he finally saw Santa Claus. He jumped and hugged him. Santa Claus said "I wish you Marry Christmas" and gave him the gift, which he had asked his father two month ago. Suddenly child looked at him and recognized his father because he noticed fathers shoes under the red cloak. He was surprised but not sad .That day he knew quit true. His father told him all about it and child was happy because his father could be Santa Claus.

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    1. Great job Hasmik
      - Suddenly, the child ..
      -and recognized that he was his father..his father's shoes
      - The truth
      the child was happy..

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