to bring something we ate and played games. And after this story every friday my best friends and I we stay in the classroom and we do the same play and eat and talk. I love my school of that.
Monday, August 3, 2015
most interssting story happend at school
It was New Year and some of my friends mothers prepared something for New Years for example one of them prepared the tree and the other one some posts on the wall and things like that. My two best friends and I we wanted to join the mothers to decorate our classroom , but we didn't know what to do. So our teacher listened us and she understands that we want to help the mothers. She took us out of the classroom and we went to her computer classroom. We waited there for ten minutes then she said go to toilet we waited there and she took the other children to the other classroom and they did history in that classroom. So we helped the mothers and we had lots of fun because when the mothers and the teachers went out of classroom
to bring something we ate and played games. And after this story every friday my best friends and I we stay in the classroom and we do the same play and eat and talk. I love my school of that.
to bring something we ate and played games. And after this story every friday my best friends and I we stay in the classroom and we do the same play and eat and talk. I love my school of that.
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Good job Anna.. However, read my feedback below carefully and edit your post.
ReplyDelete1. most interesting= The most interesting
2. capitalization, change some of the verbs to past, and restructure the last sentence
3. New Year= the week before the New Year Eve when
4. for New Year= for the New Year celebrations at our school
5. no need for " for example"
6. tree= Christmas tree
7. some posts= made some posters to put
8. no need for "we" after "I"
9. listened= listened to
10. children= students